Review: Defy by Sara B. Larson

January 22, 2014 Fantasy, Reviews 6

Defy by Sara B. Larson
Series: Defy # 1
Published by Scholastic on January 7, 2014
Genres: Fantasy
Pages: 336
Format: eARC
Source: Publisher
Goodreads
one-star
A lush and gorgeously written debut, packed with action, intrigue, and a thrilling love triangle.

Alexa Hollen is a fighter. Forced to disguise herself as a boy and serve in the king's army, Alex uses her quick wit and fierce sword-fighting skills to earn a spot on the elite prince's guard. But when a powerful sorcerer sneaks into the palace in the dead of night, even Alex, who is virtually unbeatable, can't prevent him from abducting her, her fellow guard and friend Rylan, and Prince Damian, taking them through the treacherous wilds of the jungle and deep into enemy territory.

The longer Alex is held captive with both Rylan and the prince, the more she realizes that she is not the only one who has been keeping dangerous secrets. And suddenly, after her own secret is revealed, Alex finds herself confronted with two men vying for her heart: the safe and steady Rylan, who has always cared for her, and the dark, intriguing Damian. With hidden foes lurking around every corner, is Alex strong enough to save herself and the kingdom she's sworn to protect?

A lurching stomach.  A neck that grows hot.  Flushing cheeks.  An aching skull.  Trembling.  For me, these are symptoms of a bad case of the flu.  For Alexa, the supposedly brave, ruthless warrior in Defy, this is how she responds whenever a male looks at her.  Which is often.

Alexa pretends to be a boy named Alex, the most skilled guard to Prince Damian.  She hides her identity because in this kingdom, ruled by Damian’s father, women are only useful as “breeders.”  The “breeding houses” were described in detail at the beginning of the book, and they are a horror.  Little girls are imprisoned until they reach physical maturity, and then they are raped repeatedly until they become pregnant.  Understandably, Alexa is not thrilled with this.   But I think both she and the author have a limited memory, because these breeding houses are barely referenced after their introduction.  It’s also never made clear how or why this society would tolerate (or even embrace) such a horror.

But let’s forget about the breeding houses, because Alexa has more important things on her mind.  Namely, the love triangle, which is the entire purpose for this book’s existence.  There’s arrogant, douchey Prince Damian on the one hand.  (Of course, he’s not really an arrogant douche.  He just pretended to be one for about 20 pages for reasons I still don’t understand.)  And then there’s kind, gentle Rylan on the other.  They both think she’s a boy, so WHY ARE THEY STARING AT HER LONGINGLY???  ARE THEY GAY???  Absolutely NOT.  Of course, they are MUCH TOO HOT to be gay.  They know she’s a girl, so it’s OK!  Whew!  Gay crisis averted.  I have no idea why the gender-bending plot was a factor here.  As the story goes on, it’s revealed that more people knew than didn’t that Alexa was a big ol’ fake.  Maybe they were just being nice and decided to humor her by playing along.  Was she ever really in danger?  What was the point of all of this?  And why, when these guys knew all along that Alexa is actually a girl, did they suddenly and simultaneously decide to start pawing at her?

Alexa, this tough, brave fighter, immediately turns into a simpering, whining, sobbing, tantrum-throwing mess.  Who cares about breeding houses when she’s sleeping in a room between these two guys (don’t ask) while they fight over her?  It’s not exaggerating much to say that Alexa’s blushing, flushing, aching, trembling, and crying take up nearly half of this book.  With her boy craziness, I don’t know how she found the time to become the most skilled fighter in the kingdom.

Don’t expect to find any world-building here, and there’s only the barest hint of a plot featuring -SPOILER ALERT – the easiest overthrow of a king in the history of mankind.

Note: I received an ARC from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.

 

Stephanie

6 Responses to “Review: Defy by Sara B. Larson”

  1. Cait

    BAHAHAA! I totally agree!! I gave the book another star, but it REALLY bugged me! It had so much potential! I loved Alexa…until she got all “ooh, a guy”. Like, seriously, when she pretended to be a guy she was a LOT cooler. Why does everyone knowing she’s a girl mean she needs protecting? Wasn’t she the “best” fighter in the kingdom? (I don’t buy the logistics of that either.) I didn’t like EITHER option of the triangle. I thought Alexa should ditch them both and maybe be awesome alone. And yes…those breeding houses seemed to be a bit of a dead-end, eh? I thought I was the only one who didn’t like this book. 😉 So thank you. XD
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  2. Pili

    As soon as I saw in the summary that there was a love triangle, I knew I didn’t want to read this book. Now I’m even happier than I didn’t request it.
    Thanks for your very honest review!
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  3. Savannah

    I have heard absolutely nothing good about this novel, and yet, I find that some of the funniest reviews I’ve ever read are coming from it! 🙂 I love the snark, and the “Note” at the bottom was basically one of the best ways to sum up those unbelievable shenanigans I’ve seen yet. Great post!
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